|Cover art by Jessy Lucero|
I've seen a couple of reviews of the story so far, and some of the criticisms, including Meli Hooker's in this Dreadful Tales Bit by Blood Bit review, mention pacing. Point taken. I need to work on that.
Check out the review, and the first two reviews of the other stories in the anthology. Meli seems to get the editorial oversight and machinations Lincoln tries to exert on these stories for world domina--er, an exceptional dark fiction anthology.